My in box has been awash with invitations lately - from brands, that is. It seems many companies are eager to invite me to spend money. Some invite e-mails work better than others. Here are some examples.
Pizza Express has "invited" me to buy two pizzas for the price of one. Pizza Express has been running this two-for-one offer fairly regularly for at least 18 months, so it doesn't exactly feel like a special invitation. It would have worked better if they carried it through in the copy a bit more and made a more direct link with to having the recipient invite a friend out for dinner.
What's on Stage sent me an "exclusive invitation" to save £10 on theatre tickets. I don't know what could possibly be considered exclusive about this. I'm sure I signed up for their e-mail list at some point, but I didn't join any special group and I have no elite status with them, so I can only assume that everyone on their e-mail list has "exclusively" been invited. In the early days of e-mail marketing, sending an e-mail offer could be called exclusive because (at least for bricks-and-mortar businesses) the majority of their customers weren't on the e-mail list. It was a way of driving e-mail sign ups. What's on Stage, as far as I know, does not send any direct mail or any other form of customer communication, so their e-mail offer is not exclusive.
Northwest Airlines sent me two invite e-mails, a week apart. This suggests that the first one achieved a good response rate, or at least a good open rate. The first was an invite to apply for a credit card and the second was an invite to join a program called e-Miles. The latter feels more like a genuine invitation.
I also received an invite to a shopping party at Liberty. Although their objective is clearly to get me to spend money, I like this execution. It's an actual event, so an invite is appropriate. They've done several things right:
- The 15% in-store discount starts the day of the event they've invited me to, and is only on for a few days
- They require invitees to present the invite in order to gain admittance to the event
- They suggest inviting friends and family - by having them sign up for the loyalty program
Overall, it's a strong execution that fits with their brand.
Finally, I received an invite from LinkedIn to their "private beta" release of some new features. My guess is that I was selected because I am a fairly regular user. Although they've told me I'm one of the "specially selected members", it would probably mean more to me if I know how I was selected. Nevertheless, I think this is a good execution: simple and to the point.